Frozen Impact Conflict

I am debating if I should keep Frozen Impact to post for you people to read and rate, cuz for some reason I just feel like that story is a real screw up. The Beginning I fear makes no sense, or its just a biography. And, well, I dont know. I like its idea, but I don't know if I should start over from the top, or continue the way it is. I need suggestions. So please send me your ideas at my e-mail address.